LYRIC CHEAT SHEET (LCS)
Lesson 11: The 2nd-Verse-Dilemma
Action Points:
Every song is like a book.
The chorus is the cover that grabs attention and summarizes the story. The Verses tell us in detail what happens and gives us context like the pages of the book.
Professional Songwriters like the Weeknd understand this, but not only that. They understand that every story needs development to stay interesting. So they create a different angles and perspectives to deliver their message. Because every angle creates another way their audience can connect with their songs.
Songs That Use This Concept:
A-Team by Ed Sheeran
[Verse 1]
White lips, pale face
Breathin' in the snowflakes
Burnt lungs, sour taste
Light's gone, days end
Struggling to pay rent
Long nights, strange men
Explanation
Ed Sheeran only talks about what he can pick up with his senses. His Observations paint the scene, and we get to image the girl he sings about.
Lose Your self by Eminem
[Verse 1]
His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface, he looks calm and ready
To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting
What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud…
Explanation
Eminem transports us into the world’s song. With his scene description, we can feel what the character is feeling.
Guess by Charli XCX
[Verse 1]
You wanna guess the colour of my underwear
You wanna know what I got going on down there
Is it pretty in pink or all see-through?
Is it showing off my brand-new lower-back tattoo?
Explanation
Charli XCX uses sensory information to catch us. Her sexual message grab our attention
Neon by John Mayer
[Verse 1]
When sky blue gets dark enough
To see the colors of the city lights
A trail of ruby red and diamond white
Hits her like a sunrise
Explanation
With only 4 lines, he paints the picture of the city’s skyline at night.
Short expression and small detail create the scene in our heads.
Often it’s enough to zoom in on one thing.
Cardigan by Taylor Swift
[Verse 1]
Vintage tee, brand new phone
High heels on cobblestones
When you are young, they assume you know nothing
Sequin smile, black lipstick
….
Explanation
Taylor Swift puts scene building first. Her use of sensory information transports us into her world.
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